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&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Award-winning author, screenwriter, and editor Mike Robinson believes there are a few necessary elements when writing a strong opening for your story. First, your opening needs to be unique, and your opening line needs to pop and immediately grab the reader.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Second, the tone of your story needs to be&amp;nbsp;clear in the first couple of lines. For example, is this a romantic rom-com or a dark fantasy? The reader should know pretty quickly.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Third, you need to find a good balance between detail and economy. This means giving just enough details to set up the scene, main characters, etc., but&amp;nbsp;not&amp;nbsp;telling the reader everything up front in an info dump. Robinson says, &amp;quot;Let us into the shallow end, and if we like the temperature of the water, we&amp;#39;ll swim out farther.&amp;quot;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Last, you need to use smart paragraph design, meaning shorter sentences and maybe even single lines. This will help ease the reader into the story. Whether you are a new writer or more established, readers are taking on something new with your book, so make your beginning as inviting as possible.&lt;/p&gt;
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</description></item><item><title>Writing an Opening that Hooks the Reader</title><link>https://www.authorlearningcenter.com/writing/fiction/w/plot-planning/8164/writing-an-opening-that-hooks-the-reader/revision/1</link><pubDate>Thu, 05 Jan 2023 17:33:24 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="false">809ccca5-04d2-44bf-8f5c-ff0a6d33c80b:b978639e-54cf-412a-afd7-7ea0abb80836</guid><dc:creator>Mike Robinson</dc:creator><comments>https://www.authorlearningcenter.com/writing/fiction/w/plot-planning/8164/writing-an-opening-that-hooks-the-reader#comments</comments><description>Revision 1 posted to Plot Planning by Mike Robinson on 1/5/2023 5:33:24 PM&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Award-winning author and editor Mike Robinson shares tips for writing a strong opening line and opening page, and how important this is for engaging readers.&lt;/p&gt;
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